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Issue #5
July 13, 2024
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In last week's column, I focused on a few words and their implications in the Declaration of Independence.  This time, I begin and end with one of them--not to explore its linguistic significance, but to look behind the word at a deeper story that remains very relevant today.

"We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness."  This most famous--and most important--sentence of the Declaration of Independence contains a number of words likely to attract our attention and scrutiny.  Last week, we looked at "self-evident," but we also could have examined "equal," "Rights," "Happiness," and others.  Most of us, however, are likely to skip right over the first one: "We."  Who exactly were "We"?


A partial answer can be found at the bottom of the document.  There we see several household names--Thomas Jefferson, John Adams, Samuel Adams, Benjamin Franklin, and, of course, John Hancock, whose especially large signature gave English an eponym for the word "signature."  (An eponym is a term for a word derived from a name.  I'll have more to say about eponyms in a future column.)  Here, too, are several names that are not so widely known.  Today, who outside--or, for that matter, inside--Georgia, the colony he represented, knows the name of Button Gwinnett?  It's kind of a shame, really.  His name appears in the prominent upper-left position, where we typically would start reading a list, and, let's face it, his first name is "Button."  That ought to count for something.  By the way, if you have seen the original Declaration of Independence at the National Archives in Washington, D.C., or a photograph, such as one on the National Archives website, you may have noticed the erratic appearance of some of the signatures.  The delegates from Georgia and Maryland did a good job of keeping their names neatly lined up and separated, but some of the guys from Pennsylvania were literally out of line.  Did they think they were signing an office birthday card?

Because of these signatures, we know the names of these 56 men, but what do we know about their relationships with one another?  It's more than a matter of gossip. In signing this document, these men could have been signing their death warrants, since they could be considered traitors to Great Britain. As Franklin put it, "We must all hang together, or, most assuredly, we shall all hang separately."  (You can always count on Franklin for a pithy line.)  How well did the 56 delegates and other Americans "hang together"?


It's a larger question that I cannot answer comprehensively here, but I think I can provide a few helpful insights (along with a little juicy gossip).

You could argue that the colonists as a whole hung together well enough to win the American Revolution, but there was more dissent than we might assume or wish.  John Adams disliked Benjamin Franklin and didn't mind saying so. 

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One account reads, "Congress yesterday received from Mr. Adams several letters not remarkable for any thing unless it be a display of his vanity, his prejudice against the French Court & his venom against Doctr. Franklin."  Those words were written by James Madison to Thomas Jefferson, and lest we ascribe them entirely to Madison's own feelings about Adams, we should note what Adams himself wrote about his fellow diplomat in France: 

The life of Dr. Franklin was a scene of continual dissipation . . . It was late when he breakfasted, and as soon as breakfast was over, a crowd of carriages came to his levee . . . Some philosophers, academicians, and economists; some of his small tribe of humble friends in the literary way whom he employed to translate some of his ancient compositions… But by far the greater part were women and children, come to have the honor to see the great Franklin, and to have the pleasure of telling stories about his simplicity, [and] his bald head . . ."

The last sentence reveals the real reason for Adams's "venom."  Franklin biographer H. W. Brands has written that "Adams could never forgive Franklin for receiving too much credit for events" and that the "acid of Adams’s envy continued to corrode his impression of Franklin."


Franklin, for his part, found Adams an exasperating annoyance and, worse, a threat to the American cause.  Apparently referring to Adams, who loathed everything French, Franklin wrote, "I hope the ravings of a certain mischievous madman here against France and its ministers, which I hear every day, will not be regarded in America."  The comically tempestuous relations of Adams and Franklin could fill an entire column (and eventually probably will), but I will wrap up this relationship with Franklin's characterization of his younger colleague as "always an honest man, often a wise one, but sometimes and in some things, absolutely out of his senses."


A colleague of Adams and Franklin also seems to have allowed an inferiority complex to color his feelings about Franklin--and perhaps others around him.  Arthur Lee was not a signer of the Declaration of Independence, but he was part of the larger "we" fighting for independence.  He served alongside Franklin in France and, like Adams, drove Franklin to distraction--even to the point that Franklin wrote, but never sent, a note in which he tried to pinpoint the source of Lee's dyspepsia:

It is true I have omitted answering some of your Letters.  I do not like to answer angry Letters.  I hate Disputes.  I am old, cannot have long to live, have much to do and no time for Altercation.  If I have often receiv’d and borne your Magisterial Snubbings and Rebukes without Reply, ascribe it to the right Causes, my Concern for the Honour and Success of our Mission, which would be hurt by our Quarrelling, my Love of Peace, my Respect for your good Qualities, and my Pity of your Sick Mind, which is forever Tormenting itself, with its Jealousies, Suspicions and Fancies that others mean you ill, wrong you, or fail in Respect for you.  If you do not cure your self of this Temper it will end in Insanity, of which it is the Symptomatick Forerunner, as I have seen in several Instances.  God preserve you from so terrible an Evil, and for his sake pray suffer me to live in quiet.

I've never met Lee, but I've met a few people like him, and Franklin's characterization is spot on.  It's enough to make you believe in reincarnation.


Not all of the dissent around the Declaration was personal. Some of it was–would you believe it?–political.  Recounting the consternation around the Declaration in his autobiography, Thomas Jefferson mentioned the fate of some of his language that was critical of slavery.  "The clause . . . reprobating the enslaving the inhabitants of Africa," he wrote, "was struck out in complaisance to South Carolina and Georgia, who had never attempted to restrain the importation of slaves, and who, on the contrary, still wished to continue it. Our northern brethren also, I believe, felt a little tender under those censures; for though their people had very few slaves themselves, yet they had been pretty considerable carriers of them to others."


Through all of these tumultuous times, rancorous relationships, and provincial politics, Americans managed to create something unified. The "we" prevailed. 


There’s another "we," though. Franklin alluded to it when he responded to a woman who asked him after the Constitutional Convention, “Well, Doctor, what have we got, a republic or a monarchy?"


“A republic," Franklin replied, "if you can keep it."


Let us remember Franklin's admonition. That "you" is "we."

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About Mark

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A longtime English professor, scholar, and author, Mark Canada, Ph.D., writes and lectures on a variety of authors and subjects in the fields of literature, language, history, and leadership.

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